kficrevolution ([personal profile] kficrevolution) wrote2012-02-05 01:47 am

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YG, Teddy/Bom, prompt 4

(Anonymous) 2012-02-09 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Kissing Bom's lips reminds Teddy of six years ago, when he was still trying to pretend he liked being on stage. Her forehead tastes of the familiar mix of foundation and salty sweat that would drip into his eyes during concerts; her cheeks of powdery blush and tears. He likes letting his lips and tongue find that precise point, low on her throat, where the artificial taste fades to clean skin and a hint of Bom's raspberry-scented soap.

Her thighs always have sticky rectangles on them, left behind by the body tape that holds her tiny dresses in place. He always kisses them before moving on - the way his lips clings to Bom's skin makes him smile and makes her laugh shakily above him, the smell of nail polish still lingering on her fingertips as she strokes his face and grabs at his hair.


Disjointed as fuck but I like it, somehow. \o/ Crit away if you're so inclined, anons!

Re: YG, Teddy/Bom, prompt 4

(Anonymous) 2012-02-09 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
i like it, especially the details about body tape and raspberry soap. it's not a pair that's written very often and the first line is love. i like all references to how much teddy didn't like to be on stage :D

thank you for writing!

Re: YG, Teddy/Bom, prompt 4

(Anonymous) 2012-02-09 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you, anon! :D

Re: YG, Teddy/Bom, prompt 4

(Anonymous) 2012-02-09 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
i adore all the details you included, anon ♥